Sunday 19 August 2012

Hell

It feels as if you’re always getting driven to the left where the devil is as you stand in the supermarket and you just walk out and you see fires around your eyes and hell as if the book will be given to you.

There are different songs some about how dark and ugly drawing with black paint is which I still hesitate to call nice and can find plagiarism, so I throw myself upon the first man I see who has a shirt with a bear with his eye already starting to get torn off.

And it’s someone who I don’t know and will end up in a blur as all the humans you see in the street and even as I will be having my hair torn off and the photo taken with droll stirring up the blood on my face I still won’t remember his face or how the bear looked like if you concentrate a lot you won’t even remember how your cat looks like or the smell of smoke until you breathe in or your night is crumbled by the thought and memeory thrown at you like a dream.

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I'm literally doing this while traveling XD basically I hesitated a lot as I had literally no idea who Max Bemis was and being well, studying to be a psychologist and stuff like that interested me and I even ended up reading about an hour ago of different stuff again xD yay, basically it did end up being a short story and I had enjoyed it and well, it is interesting and I guess request? And sorry for the lately short stories and thank you:)

I chose Hell as the title because if you get the word right it just fits.

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26 comments:

  1. That's awesome! I love Max Bemis! Are you planning on writing more stories?

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    1. I am and I will write more:D sorry for not replying straight away, I'm going through a really rough time at the moment:)

      separate short story?:)

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  2. Pretty good, actually. I like it, it's really short, tho. More to come?

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    1. there will be indeed:D added as number 24 on the list on the right sidebar really sorry for the long wait and thank you:)

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  3. I'd love to see more stories about him, although I don't even know him:) Sorry, but I got tired of your site recently, it's always the same people you write about, but this story is just cool and something new. But I also like your other stories. Best wishes:)

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    1. Well, it is fanfiction and requests and I do write about the same people, although different plots, I've also got some pure fiction if you're interested such as Papercut which I think is one of the finest fiction I've done and my first proper xD

      Thank you very much and I hope you enjoy the rest as well:)

      cheers!

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  4. great as always. always enjoy your stories. i hate this guy though^.^

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    1. Thank you very much:D I'm just starting to get to know him lol ;) xD but he looks cool :D and interesting to write about and thank you very very very muuuuuch:3

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  5. More of this plz<3

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    1. will do xD

      now a request for Hell3 yay XD

      please keep checking the right sidebar and sorry for the long wait, having a very rough time in my life now

      thank you for the support everyone:)

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    1. Aww, thank you:D really happy and glad you enjoyed it!!!! ^___^

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  7. OMG...I LUV IT! Plz wirte more:)

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    1. I will do xD Now Hell4 XD wow XD thank you so much for the love:)

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  8. I want more max bemis stories! the other stuff starts to bore me:)

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    1. will do XD more Max Bemis and there's a bunch of chapters of Hell which are coming as well and I hope you'll enjoy the other stuff as well:)

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  9. Dear Peeling orange...please have sex with me while reading your fanfics to me...hahaha:D Well, seriously, I love your stories and this one's awesome! I'd love to see more of these:)

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    1. ahaha xD aw, thank you I guess :D yay sex XD sorry I have a partner:) Do you want me to read them out loud?:D I love doing that by the way, lol XD

      thank you very much:3

      ok, Hell5 is on:D

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  10. Moooooooore^^ bahaha, everyone seems to want more max bemis stories and that's cool! are you going to write more stories about maxim? xoxo

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    1. I know XD I'm excited from all this attention and looove:3

      I will indeed:D ok story number 4 about Max is on the list as well xD

      thank you so so much:)

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  11. Thank you soooooo much for writing more max bemis stories! I love you<3<3<3<3

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  12. just googled "max bemis fanfic" and found this, it's amazing! I have read some other fanfics too and they were not so great, but this one's awesome, like I already said:) I can't wait for you to write more of these! I will definitively check out all your other fanfics, too. best wishes<3

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    1. Thank you:3 I just got a bad bash XD just now so thank you:3

      Sorry the list is quite long sorry for the long wait XD

      Thank you:3

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  13. I can't wait for the other Max Bemis stories. I have read this one over and over again, so often, I now know it by heart:) But seriously, how long will it take to get the other stories done? It's been such a long time, I can't wait to read some other maxim fanfics written by you:)

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    1. Ahhh, thank youuuu:3

      Oooooof, I dunno, sorry for the honesty D: I'd say no sooner than two weeks or so, sorry I've just got a long request queue :(

      Thank you:3

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